PoeticMaster
Joined Fri 07/18/08
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| Wed 07/23/08 05:16 AM |
as spark to brilliance,
the Heavens hush and opens wide
nine celestial centimeters
hairless head of sunshine slides
radiating its primitive prism
of majestic magnificence
in a shimmering spectrum
of rainbow rapture
lucent pinkish hues
glisten gagged gasps
of awakened awe
crinkled wrinkled
smile struggles to suckle
angelic air until slapped
crisp cry splits humbled heart
when suddenly shining star stops
perfection poses proudly
for doting daddy
seven second scene
painted priceless and permanent
like last breath before death
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somewhatshy2
Joined Sat 03/29/08
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| Wed 07/23/08 05:27 AM |
  nice
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PoeticMaster
Joined Fri 07/18/08
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MisKim323
Joined Sat 06/28/08
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Puffins1958
Joined Tue 02/27/07
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| Wed 07/23/08 06:00 AM |
fabulous
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PoeticMaster
Joined Fri 07/18/08
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| Wed 07/23/08 06:30 AM |
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thank you Kim and Puff
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d4tc
Joined Tue 04/15/08
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| Wed 07/23/08 02:56 PM |
Well Written! I enjoyed this.  
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LAMom
Joined Tue 12/12/06
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| Wed 07/23/08 03:02 PM |
There is nothing in life more than the birth of my Children,, well maybe my Grandbabies,, that just brings pure bliss into ones soul,,,,
Beautiful,,
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Sharris
Joined Sun 12/10/06
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| Wed 07/23/08 03:55 PM |
I remember finally breathing when I saw them
a beautiful recollection you have gifted us.
vivid and brilliant.
s
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PoeticMaster
Joined Fri 07/18/08
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| Thu 07/24/08 10:17 AM |
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thank you Sharris/LA/d4
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starlynsangel
Joined Fri 06/27/08
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| Thu 07/24/08 11:24 AM |
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very nice
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pkd1220
Joined Thu 05/24/07
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| Thu 07/24/08 12:05 PM |
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the act of a new life joining us is a most awesome event indeed
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PoeticMaster
Joined Fri 07/18/08
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